Posted 04 December 2007 - 01:34 AM
I'll.... ...uhhhh.... ....adapt.
But I agree with the general tenor of the criticisms. I see zero stories without scrolling on my iBook. Way too many rows of links I'll never click as I come for the news.
And it may be an illusion because of the shorter lines, but you seem to be using fewer words in the headlines, making it harder for me to know if I want to read a story in the first place, so you're making the most important feature on the site both harder to access and less informational. And the two columns of stories are inherently less visually organized.
One suggestion: If you put the time of the story right at the end of the headline you'd gain about 10-12 characters per headline.
Another suggestion: You said the forums weren't up yet, so I didn't try, but I'd like to see elements like "multi-quote" tools for replying and numbered posts to make it easier to get back to one you've scrolled past. But please, no outline style threaded multi-level tree structure thingie. I just visually give up on those right away.
Overall: busy, conflicting/competing design elements and styles that I feel attacks you rather than invites you, ads too visually prominent -- I have clicked on unobtrusive "ad-sense" ads on the web, but I long ago trained my eye to avoid even seeing anything loud and flashing as soon as I ID it as advertising -- it's so MySpace or early PornSite -- so making them bigger and harder to ignore only makes me more likely to want to leave the site for somewhere my eyes can concentrate on editorial content, not more likely to click on an ad which has already offended me by getting in my face.
Nothing except a few features are presented to you, so you have to figure out how to "operate the page" before you can really use it for anything but those features -- scroll, press a black button or a grey one or press a text link, etc. And then pressing Mac takes to a screen that only shows you one thing without scrolling (and I saw a total waste of pixels before that when I pressed iPod. Was that an ad? A design element? All that top of the screen space to just display the word "iPod"?
The Yiddish word for the overall visual schema would be (excuse the semi-phonetic spelling) "ungepached."
So clearly lots of work has gone into this, and many ideas are on display, but I really don't care for it. Still, not to worry, deliver strong news and review goods even through all this whiz-bang widgets, hard to avoid ads, latest web cues stuff and I'll still be here. And will.... ...adapt.